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Descreption Of My Tears... (comments)
written by porkchop_chick07:02 PM 4/12/05My tears,
tears raindrops sliding down my eyes,
tears a river that leds to his ocean,
tears made of glass that fall only to break,
tears a sheild to hide the pain,
tears a mirror to reflect nothing but memories,
tears a waterfall full of suffering,
tears nothing but emotion finally being expressed,
ooh those tears of mine. |
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I wrote this some time ago but I decided to re enter it to see what people think of it. Please take some time out to comment.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-12-2005 - 07:35 PM)
| I like how you described your tears, this is an exelent poem. you should write more.why are you crying?
love always
jenna |
by bloodlyvalentine (4-12-2005 - 07:37 PM)
by Executioner520 (4-12-2005 - 08:29 PM)
| Nice. It's very good. Never knew you could describe tears in so many ways. |
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