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If u didn't love me (comments PLEASE)
written by porkchop_chick07:29 PM 4/12/05If u didn't Love me...
then why did u tell me u missed me,
then why did u look at me with eyes full of love,
then why did u hold me with all your might,
then why did u protect me from all dangers,
then why did u care so much on how I felt,
then why did u make me fall in love with u,
The day your cousin (my friend) introduced us, u could have just said Hi and never came around every weekend to see me. U could have spared me the pain and humiliation. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Its not one of my best poems but i'd like to have some comments, PLEASE!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by randomdude666 (4-12-2005 - 07:30 PM)
| purley brillient (wee smile)
write more plz
lots o love, randomdude666 |
by xkattx (4-12-2005 - 07:34 PM)
| that was seriously brill
i get want you mean and how you feel |
by randomdude666 (4-12-2005 - 07:36 PM)
| ime lovin u allready, the both of yous! |
by magical_goddess_of_nature (4-13-2005 - 11:19 AM)
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