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Cant hold on(comments plz)
written by mansonlover9109:59 PM 4/12/05You tell me to wait
To wait till you get to me
So you can hold me
And comfort me
But I cant hold on anymore
I'm letting go
And I havent seen you
You havent held me and i'm going
I'm going because I cant take anymore
I cant take anymore of this pain
Of this world
This world wont even notice that i'm gone
But you will
And i'm sorry for that
I'm sorry for causeing you pain
But I had to leave |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-12-2005 - 10:11 PM)
| DEEP. But it hit a couple of things (well everything) that i've went through. it was really good! |
by (guest) (4-13-2005 - 04:49 AM)
| This is my life in a nut shell. Its great. |
by ReapersScythe (4-13-2005 - 06:07 PM)
| The story of my life...very well written. |
by maura_lil_ly (4-13-2005 - 11:26 PM)
| wow..very very nice, i can relate |
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