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with you (comments)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP10:44 PM 4/12/05starting to sway as i lay with you
praying that everything you say is true
the rumor of your double life feels so sureal
getting confused with what it is feel
but then i look at you and the whole world is alright
i look at you and i know i could die in your eyes tonite
i'll stay just till forever,
thats the only time for you i have
let me hit pause on this movie,
just so i can watch you laugh
i'm falling as i stand,
when you hold me in your arms
i'm captivated by your every i love you
and how they cover up all my scars
don't ever let go of my soul
even if you choose to go
so i can dream of memories
of the heart i used to own
fill my head up with lies,
just don't ever let me know
i love you with my every fiber
with you i'm not alone |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
do yu like it, its for HIM eeryone knows what i mean
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloody_tears_girl (4-13-2005 - 01:30 AM)
| i dont like it, i LOVE it. its like you took the words right out of my mouth. i feel the exact same way. VERY good job. |
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