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» Poem: You Were My Love
You Were My Love
written by chaoticthoughts
05:11 AM 4/13/05
I loved you, but that was a while ago, and what I know now is what I wish I had known
Before I gave into that first kiss, when you stole my heart, a moment together we never missed
Be with each other all the time, I wish I loved you more, maybe everything would be just fine
We had sex, made love as you'd say, but somehow it didn't work, are you to blame?
I heard you were cheating, but my heart beat so fast, I didn't trust them, you were my lass
But the reality of life had fatefully sunk in, and discovered the other relationship you were in
I loved with a passion, gave you my life, and when it crumbled, so did my soul light
I was dead to everyone, but put on a strong act, no one new because I was good at that
But somehow you saw right through that, and new I tried to die, and oddly you were at my side
You said don't die over me, I'm not worth it, please realize, open you're eyes and see
And with that said I learned that night, that I was no longer going to cry
For I loved you, and thought you loved me, but as it turns out you had fallen out of love with me


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um..........yeah this is it

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» Comments / Feedback
by cookie_monster65106 (4-13-2005 - 05:13 AM)
omg......this brings tears to my eyes. :'( so sad....i feal heartbroken....me is sorry :(

by yours2have05 (4-13-2005 - 10:02 AM)
hey i know exactly how you feel an can relate..im just not able to put my words on paper as well as you can..

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