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Stabbed
written by untidy_posession11:51 AM 4/13/05Pain in his chest, an open wound,
Gaping like jaws of fatality,
He touches his blood soak clothes,
Ponders this abnormality.
But no pain he feels,
Astonishment, he is cold,
Flashing lights before his eyes,
His life begins to unfold,
Remembering drug abuse,
Clouds of smoke, tobacco,
Reminisce, what he did,
It seems so long ago,
Wishing he'd exlored,
The boundries of life,
Now it's slowly ending,
Thanks to two stabs with the knife. |
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About a Boy who was murdered. Comments welcome.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ballerinalovely (4-13-2005 - 12:41 PM)
| wow....that was really good......I am impressed. I think your poem portrays a very well thought of point in life. good job...i look forword to reading more. |
by ballerinalovely (4-13-2005 - 12:41 PM)
| wow....that was really good......I am impressed. I think your poem portrays a very well thought of point in life. good job...i look forword to reading more. |
by pipa (4-13-2005 - 06:05 PM)
| h.y.e.b.s.t.h.b.i? WELL MIMI HAVE YOU, HAVE YOU, good poem btw |
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