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» Poem: FREAK(pitchdark)
FREAK(pitchdark)
written by Nug
05:18 PM 4/13/05
Come on over and fuck my world.
if i would be her would i deserve you sir?
deserve you sir???

i begin to deny myself. i am so narrow-minded

come on over and fuck my head
if i would look like her would i deserve.
arouse you sir?


what comes around if you're bound to her?
my dreams were feeble-minded.

wake up i destroy all of your hopes

CHORUS:

am i just a pitchblack sky
you think i'm your pitch-dark flight.
i think about passionate love
you seemed sweet but you are not.

rappart:
he said: your closes are too tight (freak)
you eyes no longer blind (to see)he's so mean.
he don't needs me. yes i am some kinda freak.
i don't want to see your face again. feel free.
to say. go away. away,away.away.


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this is an another song:COMMENTS ARE WELCOME

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» Comments / Feedback
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (4-13-2005 - 05:57 PM)
awesome

by blackest_night (4-14-2005 - 01:08 PM)
really good.

by theexies17 (4-18-2005 - 07:36 PM)
that's really cool

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