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written by teejavus05:35 PM 4/13/05if i say i love you
will you love me to
will u be close to me
till end of eternity
or should i let you go |
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i really need to fall in love so that i can write some long ones... lol--- any suggestion for title
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| » Comments / Feedback | by naughtylilpixie (4-13-2005 - 05:56 PM)
| Short but with a significant question. I like it. |
by depressed_angel (4-13-2005 - 06:07 PM)
| interesting ...very very interesting i liked it alot |
by xangelbumx (4-13-2005 - 06:38 PM)
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 05:23 PM)
| If u really love her thn even if she doesnt bother to love u or b close to u , u wont b able to " let her go" and if u "should let her go" if she doesnt love u thn u dnt actually love her. and if u dont love her thn y ask such a question?? Now in other words the question can b answered only and only by yourself coz ure the only solution to the questions that u ask. {i guess i hav answered ur question} hahaha well its actually awesum!!! |
by teejavus (4-15-2005 - 05:47 PM)
| well ank i didnt had her (u kno hu) in my mind but it was somebody else whom u dont know |
by xxSh0rtxxStuffxx (4-19-2005 - 01:59 AM)
by rammstein-freak (4-20-2005 - 03:20 PM)
| awwwwww, wow, i think that sums up my life. love it |
by SadistAria (4-23-2005 - 11:37 AM)
| I've been through that love...its a mere reflection, just know who you are and what you want..if there is inner conflict, then there is no reason to ask why..because a relationship should not have any doubts.. be well |
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