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Still Dead
written by Scythe4211:11 PM 4/13/05love the scent of rotting flesh in the morning,
I love the sight of darkness at night,
I love the sound of crackle and pop as your blood boils,
I love the taste of revenge in my mouth,
Just because I don't see the good in anything,
I haven't tasted the sweetness of life,
Or heard those wonderful words that make everyone smile,
I haven't seen those colorful eyes,
I haven't even felt love as so many have,
I have not even lived. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by maura_lil_ly (4-13-2005 - 11:23 PM)
| I really like it, except the last three lines dont fit in there very well, i think you should add a word or two before each line, and make it fit better, but hey, thats just me |
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