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Her Very Sad Story
written by bloody_tears_girl01:21 AM 4/14/05this girl fell in love,
and out of all people, the leader of the gang.
people told her she was stupid,
to have joined such a thing.
but she needed this.
she needed to feel wanted.
so she went along with them,
hurting people, only to feel like she was someone.
she was in this gang for about 3 months,
and finally realized it was wrong,
she tried to tell him she was done,
and he told her that it was o.k.,
until that one night came,
when they surrouned her with chains,
there were about 20 of them.
you can probably guess what happened next,
thay beat her with the chains,
all because she wanted out.
so she died in the hospital,
all because she wanted to start her life over. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is a true story, its about my best friens who died in a gang. plze comment it will help
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Whisperthewind (4-14-2005 - 01:37 AM)
| So........Beautiful..........*cries* I liked it though. |
by ceres (4-14-2005 - 01:48 AM)
| Death is a horrible thing...... but I love your poem it means something. |
by RazorBladeKisses4U (4-14-2005 - 05:31 AM)
| Man, I bloody wish I could be half as good as you. |
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