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The Reason For Suicide
written by bloody_tears_girl05:01 AM 4/14/05this is how you've ruined me,
kept my words inside,
you are why i hurt myself,
you are why i cried.
you're the reason for all this anger,
the reason for all this pain,
i don't know how to act around you,
so i'll just hide my face in shame.
your'e the reason for all the bruises,
the reason for all these scars,
the reason i have cuts everywhere,
up and down my arms.
your'e the reason iv'e lost trust
the reason that what i'm about to do,
may make other people cry,
but will only help you.
so you're the reason for what i did,
the reason i'm no longer alive,
you're the reason i'm gone now,
the reason for suicide. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for my abusive ex matt. PLZE COMMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by IMAGINARY_ISOLATION (4-14-2005 - 05:03 AM)
| those are good reasons for that |
by TheUndeadBlackRose (4-14-2005 - 05:18 AM)
| It's a good poem, although I really hope you don't cut yourself over some ass, trust me hun, guys are just for babies. xDD
Just kidding, good poem. ~Grey |
by maledeth (4-14-2005 - 05:19 AM)
| Good reasons?! You only gave one reason, and your reason was a worthless fuck! Still, it's weak to off yourself because of one person, and you know one thing? You haven't even said your proper goodbye. I am fucking tired of seeing people bitch about their stupidity here with suicide. |
by bloody_tears_girl (4-14-2005 - 05:27 AM)
| ummm, well if you dont like it then leave, nobody is making you stay. plus, there are bigger reasons for it that i chose not to describe, so maybe you should get your facts straight. |
by RazorBladeKisses4U (4-14-2005 - 05:29 AM)
| Ignore that dumb fuck, your poem was beautiful, and, I know very well how you feel, which none of us know your story. So please, do not say things like that maledeth or whatever your name was, you dont know his/her story. |
by maledeth (4-14-2005 - 06:48 AM)
| It doesn't matter. All that I see is she's still alive. You get your fucking acts straight if you're going to express your "oh-so suicidal" despair. Rejoice on how it is done, not written. |
by maledeth (4-14-2005 - 06:49 AM)
| Besides, you said leave comments, I left comments. Don't contradict yourself here and now. It makes you look foolish. |
by bloody_tears_girl (4-14-2005 - 09:45 AM)
| well than obviously you have no idea what people like me go through, so if you dont like its thats just too fucking bad. |
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