ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: all your fault (comment please)
all your fault (comment please)
written by the_pain_vampiress
06:29 AM 4/14/05
you told me everything would be okay
someday it would get better
but you lied
its not all better
nothing is
the pain just doesnt fade away
everythings a mess
and even you have left me now
its like i dont even exist
and no one cares
everyone has given up on me
why shouldnt i give up on myself
and make it easier for everyone else
just take the knife
and press it downas hard as i can
and drag it down my wrists
it doesnt matter anyway
its not like anyone would stop me
in fact they might even watch
and smile as i bled to death
it'd be all your fault
you left me when i needed you most
you gave me your hand
and told me to hold on
but when i tried to grab it
you just took it back
and watched me as i fell
deeper and deeper
into my eternal hell
its all your fault


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
umm ive never written a poem that didnt rhyme b4, can sum1 tell me if its any good or not?

[ View the_pain_vampiress's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 112 times


» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.