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Pain..
written by perfect.flaws
06:38 AM 4/14/05
I cant take this pain,
that just wants to remain
Im lost in one big hurricane
that never seems to bend.
In this world i just seem to blend,
but my mind shows me different
i guess its just an arguement
but mind wont comprehend.
I colapse on the ground
knowing i wont be found
I colapse on the ground
showing all my agony
this just cant be. is this the fee
i must pay for all my lifes well being?
My mind is a Hurricane!
My thoughts are seperate from my brain
im apart of one big world chain
but honestly i cant contain
all of this pain.
What is it thats causing me to feel
like im stuck inside myself
and inside of me is a never ending tunnel
Its black, and cold, and one big hurricane
that never seems to end.


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