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» Poem: Jaded...
Jaded...
written by perfect.flaws
07:33 AM 4/14/05
Clawing, Scratching, Ripping, reattaching,
Its all deep down inside,
its where it likes to hide.
Kill, Decapitate, Murder, Hate,
im justs its helpless worm, im only bait.
Fuck! i cant think straight.
I once felt elated,
but now im jaded
because im so hated.
I just cant take it!
Clawing, Scratching, Ripping, Reattaching
Its all deep down inside,
its where it likes to hide.
Kill, Decapitate, Murder, Hate.
Its all deep down inside
its where it likes to hide.
Happy Sensations, So Elated,
but now only Crazy temptations, So Jaded.
My life has Faded.


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I know i changed the title, i think Jaded fits best.

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» Comments / Feedback
by y_dun_u_luv_mii (4-14-2005 - 07:37 AM)
very full of anger and emotion. it was excellent

by spiteful-vengence (4-14-2005 - 08:36 AM)
yes this was good...i like the way you use your words....keep it up...

by lycan_of_death (4-14-2005 - 11:06 AM)
That is so awsome. It is really good and just....deep....

by BloodyBallzRebal (4-14-2005 - 02:11 PM)
that was soo much....sadness....ALSOME!! Rock On...-Rebal

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