» Poem: Jaded... |
Jaded...
written by perfect.flaws07:33 AM 4/14/05Clawing, Scratching, Ripping, reattaching,
Its all deep down inside,
its where it likes to hide.
Kill, Decapitate, Murder, Hate,
im justs its helpless worm, im only bait.
Fuck! i cant think straight.
I once felt elated,
but now im jaded
because im so hated.
I just cant take it!
Clawing, Scratching, Ripping, Reattaching
Its all deep down inside,
its where it likes to hide.
Kill, Decapitate, Murder, Hate.
Its all deep down inside
its where it likes to hide.
Happy Sensations, So Elated,
but now only Crazy temptations, So Jaded.
My life has Faded. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by y_dun_u_luv_mii (4-14-2005 - 07:37 AM)
very full of anger and emotion. it was excellent |
by spiteful-vengence (4-14-2005 - 08:36 AM)
yes this was good...i like the way you use your words....keep it up... |
by lycan_of_death (4-14-2005 - 11:06 AM)
That is so awsome. It is really good and just....deep.... |
by BloodyBallzRebal (4-14-2005 - 02:11 PM)
that was soo much....sadness....ALSOME!! Rock On...-Rebal |
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