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» Poem: Waiting for a answer (comments please)
Waiting for a answer (comments please)
written by porkchop_chick
06:28 PM 4/14/05
I've waited months,
Waited months for u,
Waited with nothing but LOVE in my heart,
My heart telling me ur just busy,
My mind telling me u just don't care for me nomore,
Listening to my heart,
Knowing that was my mistake,
A mistake I would soon regret,
I get the news,
But not from u,
But from ur own flesh and blood,
U tell ur cousin and best friend,
U tell her u just don't care for me nomore,
In a hurry she calls me,
I knew the moment I picked up the phone,
That this was it,
The moment I would finally know,
The day I found out thats u...
U just don't LOVE me nomore.


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» Comments / Feedback
by pipa (4-14-2005 - 06:28 PM)
Another good one, well done,

by porkchop_chick (4-14-2005 - 06:30 PM)
Thank u for all your nice comments, I also really like your poems.

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