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I remember... COMMENTS PLEASE!
written by porkchop_chick06:41 PM 4/14/05I remember...,
when we firsy met,
how when I saw u,
all I felt was butterflies in my stomach,
but now the only feeling I get in my stomach,
is the feeling to fall to my knees and cry,
I remember...,
how when u held me I felt safe,
but now when u hold me,
I feel betrayed,
I remember...,
when I looked into your eyes,
all I saw was such LOVE,
but now all I see is discous,
I remeber...,
when you would ask me whats wrong,
when all I really felt was sadness,
in thinking that one day u would be gone,
but now u never ask,
u never ask because u don't care no more,
I remember...,
when u LOVED me,
but now all u feel is hate,
the reason being.....
the reason I don't know. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by TheUndeadBlackRose (4-14-2005 - 06:44 PM)
It's a great poem, if you feel this way I'm sorry and I hope you feel better lovie. =) ~Grey |
by AthiestAnarchist (4-14-2005 - 10:51 PM)
I liked it a lot....I myself have felt this way before too....I hope things get better for you. |
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