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Fatalistic World
written by perfect.flaws
09:24 PM 4/14/05
This world is all fake
where everyone is a slithering snake.
White lies, black lies, everyone lies.
Why cant we all be crude,
natural, just bare and nude.
Let you be seen as who you really are,
instead of sitting at an empty bar,
drinking away your sinful soul,
thinking your paying the right tole.
Reality isnt in control,
Everyone thinks their on parole.

This world is distorted,
We're all mentally imported,
Reality is we're all racially sorted.
We're all killing eachother,
world thats smokely smothered,
we shouldnt even be extant,
each one of us is used as an implement,
by the government, friends, your parents,
no one really needs a warrent,
we all do what we please,
this world just wont cease.
Yet everyone one still dreads,
if their next to be dead.
I know you cant comprehend, so
Im sorry but none of this will ever end.
No one wants or even trys to mend,
This fucking fatalistic world.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Not really clear. Not really the best i could have done. but what do you think?

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