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Wouldnt you?(plz comment)
written by dark_child0710:05 PM 4/14/05For the last month,
my whole world has revolved around you,
I know deep inside my heart,
that I dont wanna be with anyone but you.
You gave me my first kiss,
the first set of loving arms besides my dads,
You knew when I wanted to cry without me saying anything,
even when I was mad!
You gave me a place to feel special,
in your arms I had a sacred space,
and I have come to realize,
that nobody can take your place.
But lately you have been drifting,
like you dont want me around,
you no longer keep my feet planted,
firmly on the ground.
I gave you everything,
including my heart,so why do you push me away?
why are we drifting apart?
You called me by her name,
How could you?
If she was free a month ago,
you would hadated her wouldnt you?
I thought you wanted to be with me,
just as much as I want to be with you.
but the truth is,
you would rather be with her wouldnt you? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by MaterLuna-26 (4-14-2005 - 10:09 PM)
| this is good and is there some thing you need to talk about there chica, and i think you should show this to anthony |
by (guest) (4-14-2005 - 10:17 PM)
| I liked the poem..in someways I feel the same way. |
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