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Crimson Tears
written by DeadInside187
10:19 PM 4/14/05
I have fallen now and I am giving in
I am ready to perform this deadly sin
I have faked this smile for far too long
The smile that hid from everyone that everything is wrong
This is my final stand
I am holding my heart in my hand
How shall I end all my pain and strife
Pills, gun, rope or the sweet knife
This dagger will be the choice of my end
Please give me your sweet kiss old friend
I make the cut and instantly feel the pain
The blood seeps and falls like the rain
Pouring and pouring from my crimson wrist
I can feel the grasp of death’s iron clad fist
Death’s dark angel now stands above me
He knows this is my cry to be free
My life is now hanging by a strand
Death’s angel now takes the dagger from my hand
And he thrusts the blade deep into my skin
And continues pushing it deeper and deeper within
I feel the blade pierce my heart soaked in fears
And in my final moments I shed my blood tears
The tears of crimson stream down my face
And I finally say goodbye to this place


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just wrote it...tell me what you think...

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» Comments / Feedback
by xxSh0rtxxStuffxx (4-19-2005 - 01:53 AM)
it's sad, but i love it!!

by midnight_mistress07 (4-23-2005 - 01:06 AM)
i love it...that is bsicaly all there is to say. Good job:)

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