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All Locked Away(plz comment)
written by dark_child0710:22 PM 4/14/05Its hard to feel what you feel,
without shedding a tear,
its hard to know what you think about,
then pretend thats not what I hear.
Its hard to see what you see,
without being scared,
these feelings I get,
are way too much to bear.
There is a positive side,
to feeling what you do,
it hides me from the pain I feel,
by focusing on you.
It hides me from the sorrow,
the sadness I have in MY heart,
it shields me from realizing,
my world is falling apart.
It hides the pain, the tears that I once cried,
and replace it with YOUR fears,
it lets me know when I need to be there,
to wipe away your tears.
I can sense your sadness,
from 3 hrs. away,
focusing on your hurt, anger, and pain,
locks mine away deep inside my heart, I keep it all locked away! |
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Danni, this is for you.....from one empath to another [ View dark_child07's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 117 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by MaterLuna-26 (4-14-2005 - 10:32 PM)
that is great poem very nice and i know what you mean , i don't know what are my feelings and what are others any more |
by XxEmOnIgHtMaRexX (4-15-2005 - 12:27 AM)
since u siad plz comment ..i must cuz im like that but u write ree;y good check out one of my poems one of these tiems and tell me what u think
-Ryan |
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