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U took ur love, my life comments please!
written by porkchop_chick
02:40 AM 4/15/05
The moment u left,
everything turned around,
my happiness turned to sadness,
my smile turned into a frown,
my good energy turned to problems,
my whole life wt downhill,
the day u took my heart,
u took everything else with it,
u were the last thing I had left,
I have nothing else now,
nothing else to wake up to,
now I only wake up to,
a bed full of my tears,
from the day before,
a headache from the cring,
bloodshot eyes from the cring,
I was once happy,
but theres no more us,
so theres no more ME.


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