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He'll be back (COMMENTS PLEASE!)
written by porkchop_chick03:20 AM 4/15/05He'll be back I said to myself,
I told myself that day after day,
all the days u left,
I cried and told myself,
that you'll notice what your leaving behind,
that you'll look behind u,
and you'll see me there waiting for u,
waiting for the man I that once LOVED me,
I waited stupidly for 2 months,
u came back,
but u were not u,
u were someone else,
u weren't the man I feel in LOVE with,
u were someone else,
who didn't care for me,
u wanted me gone,
thats why u came back,
u wanted to tell me,
u wanted to tell me there was no LOVE left in u,
u wanted to take my heart away,
face to face. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by iheartMisFiTs (4-15-2005 - 03:25 AM)
sweetheart.....get over it.Its a guy....and that poem made you sound way too whiney! |
by porkchop_chick (4-15-2005 - 04:07 AM)
If ur going to comment on my poems, don't give me no BITCHEY comment on how I sound whiney. Don't leave nothing if ur going to insult me and my work. |
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