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» Poem: using me
using me
written by blackrose777
04:44 AM 4/15/05
i dont care how hard you fall
i dont care how far you fall
i dont care how long you fall
i just dont care at all

you took everything from me
you took my heart and soul
all you left for me was pain
i never want to see you again
i hate you right now though
quit touching me
quit watching me
quit torturing me
quit using me
all long i thought you really loved me
but you were just using me
you made me feel sorry for you
you made me friends turn away
they all saw right through you
they tired to tell me the truth
but i didn't listen
i told them you werent like that
but i was wrong about you
you left me heartbroken and alone
so i went back to my friends
i figured out your web of lies
now that your gone
im better off without you
im glad your no longer in my life
your the biggest mistake i ever made
but now its all over
and i can finally breathe again
the tide stopped pulling me under
now that i look back on it
i feel sorry for you
and i pray that no girl will ever have to go through
all that you put me through


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» Comments / Feedback
by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 05:00 AM)
oii! that is good.. better than mine anyway.. your talented keep up the good work -Rob

by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 05:00 AM)
oii! that is good, you really captured your feelings.. better than any mine anyway.. your talented keep up the good work -Rob

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