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believing
written by blackrose77705:09 AM 4/15/05ive lost all my faith
ive lost the will to believe
surrounded by my grief
i wait and wait
pondering my existence
in this passing world
faith is a mere word
it no longer has a meaning
if faith means to believe
then faith doesnt exist
what is the point in believing
it gives you a false sence of hope
hope another meaningless word
i used to believe in everything
now i believe in nothing
believing caused me more pain
i stopped hoping, i stopped dreaming
i used to believe in love
but now i know love doesnt help
but cause more lonliness
there is nothing worth believing in
for those that believe
why do you have faith
faith in something that isnt real
faith is a mere word
just like believe
that had no point to me |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
for all you ppl who can't understand this poem i belive in God...sheesh...im trying to say in this poem that i dont believe in hoping for soemthing that isnt real
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 05:11 AM)
| hey,
umyeah thats an awesome poem.
if thats how you relly feel, you can believe!!!you shouldbelieve!!believe in God!!he believes in you!!!
think about it.
later |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 05:12 AM)
| hey,
umyeah thats an awesome poem.
if thats how you relly feel, you can believe!!!you shouldbelieve!!believe in God!!he believes in you!!!
think about it.
later |
by butcakes (4-15-2005 - 06:50 AM)
| im up with the (guest)... God rocks dude, get yourself wrapped in him...;) rockon |
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