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Stabbed in the Back (comment please)
written by --comfortably_numb--05:16 AM 4/15/05That’s what I am...
Fukin confused
Help
Help
Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cure this pain... This ultimate need
This desperate want to understand
Coz I need to understand
You ignore me day by day,
I get so frustrated,
And I’m so confused...
Coz there is always a question in my mind…
Do you care for me?
or more for him?
You can’t answer now,
I’ve made you uncomfortable
Because you don’t want me to jump...
Jump that wall above my house,
And free fall down,
The 56 storeys that will kill me…
But I’m being serious now!!
Do you care more for me?
Or more fo’ him?
You cannot speak anymore...
I hear you scream, as you fall to the floor…
As the one you love stab’s you in the back once more…
I shout ‘I told you so’,
But you just lie there gasping,
In shock and disbelief…
I laugh and remember,
how many times I told that it would just happen again…
you can’t say shit now…
I don’t care,
I beat his ass down to the floor,
and leave the two lovers to die together…
even though they both loved you,
one stabbed you in the back,
And because of your mistake,
You live no more… |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackrose777 (4-15-2005 - 05:26 AM)
| that was really good...i liked it..keep rocking on...and thanks for your comment earlier |
by perfect.flaws (4-15-2005 - 05:34 AM)
| i like this as well... but who exactly are you talking about.. it only reminded me of my mother and the question for me would be " who do she love more..her boyfriend or me more "
very good. lots of emotion |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 01:18 PM)
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