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David's song
written by blackrose777
05:24 AM 4/15/05
ignorance and fear keeps you locked deep down inside tour soul
everything you knew had been ripped up bit by bit
your heart never stops pounding within your chest

and this is David's song giving you the courage to carry on
because when your lost and looking for a way to escape
theres a light at the end of every tunnel, just got to find your way
even in your darkest hour the sun will still shine
so throw away your fears and walk away leaving your hatred behind
there's more to this wprld than you may see

suicide isn't the answer, just remember when your gone
those that love you will blame themselves for what you've done
there is always another way, there is always someone who cares
knives only cause more bleeding, they dont end the pain
just think when your gone you will never feel again
hear, smell, or taste again, once its over thats the end
and this is David's song giving you the courage to carry on..........


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is dedicated to David

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» Comments / Feedback
by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 05:41 AM)
hey, nice one.. It shows nice emotion..

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