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I hate your Smile
written by --comfortably_numb--05:38 AM 4/15/05You have always had a smile of reassuring joy
A smile that would cheer me up and fill me with warmth
Now it’s all changed
Please don’t forget that
I am a different person now
People have changed me views
My views of life and my views of you
So now please understand I hate you and your smile
Your horrific, devastating smile
Your smile of putrid disgusting feeling
So please understand I will never feel the same way for you again
I may have loved you
But not anymore
I have changed
Now I am a new person
And more importantly
Now I’m my own person
I’ve moved away
You’ve faded from my eyes
My sight
And too my knowledge
You’ve faded from my heart
When I think of you I don’t think love I think hate
I hate the way you act like I’m your son
I won’t have it
Please stop pretending
Stop dreaming
Stop thinking of me
Because I don’t think of you
Not any more
I’ve moved on from you and your smile
I’m a new person
I hate you
And more importantly
I hate your smile |
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about me and mum mum.. R.I.P.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackrose777 (4-15-2005 - 05:46 AM)
| hey this is me again lol. wow that was beautifully written. im sorry for your loss. rock on |
by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 05:49 AM)
| hey, thnx, and every1 out there, don't use this poem as inspiration! I wrote this poem after having 7 years of hate beetween us... use this as inspiration to have a better realtionship wiuth your rents, you don't want to hate your mum, and have her die when your 14 never having said a proper goodbye.. I nthough my mum was strong and wouldnt die. I was wrong.. don't feel like I did, love your rents. |
by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 05:50 AM)
| hey, thnx, and every1 out there, don't use this poem as inspiration! I wrote this poem after having 7 years of hate beetween us... use this as inspiration to have a better realtionship wiuth your rents, you don't want to hate your mum, and have her die when your 14 never having said a proper goodbye.. I nthough my mum was strong and wouldnt die. I was wrong.. don't feel like I did, love your rents. |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 01:11 PM)
| Wow, that's a really good poem. |
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