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I wish (plz comment)
written by --comfortably_numb--05:57 AM 4/15/05I wish,
I wish I could have all that joy you seem to show,
I wish I could have the thoughts that you think,
I wish I could be loved by the people who you’re loved by,
I wish I were you and me no more,
I wish that I had feelings instead of cuts and bruises,
I wish I wasn’t me but instead a bit like you,
I wish I had your looks and your overall smartness,
I wish I had your Laugh and your amazing friends and lovers,
I wish for just one day I wasn’t me but I was you,
I wish that I was heeling instead of burning all over,
I wish that I wasn’t crying but instead I was Laughing and smiling,
I wish that you could guide me to a happier brighter path,
I wish you could say hello to me so I don’t feel like I’m not there,.
I wish I was a smarter person, a funny nice and sensitive person,
I wish that for just one day I could have your popularity and not my doom,
I wish that I were a better person instead of getting worse by the minute,
I wish that you could feel my pain and know what it was like to be the dunce,
I wish that I wasn’t such a feeling less person but instead a bright and happy person,
I wish I could lose that pain, those years of burning sorrow,
I wish that you would talk to me to guide me away from doom,
I wish that I could have my end instead of my never-ending pain,
I wish that I could have a conscience something to guide me better,
I wish that that pain would stop attacking me, killing my insides and my soul,
I wish I wasn’t so stupid, dumb and screwed up, so I could learn some rules,
I wish that I could learn to fight, to keep the bullies from me,
I wish that for just one long day, I was you and not me,
I wish, I wish, I wish.. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
umm.. dedicated to Hannah, who to me seems like she has the perfect life.. to me it's so hard to live, and she makes it no easier.. she got it easy, but still I love her...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackrose777 (4-15-2005 - 05:59 AM)
| aww thats so sweet...shes a really lucky girl...p.s the poem is good |
by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 06:00 AM)
| hehe, I am the expelled regect of my school.. every1 hates me.. ohh, blackrose, can you gimme some tips on how to get a girl to like me.. (or even notice me..) |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 01:15 PM)
| yet another great poem. I love it. -AthiestAnarchist (at school still...oh the sadness) |
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