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Feel the pain
written by --comfortably_numb--06:24 AM 4/15/05| Put a dagger through my heart or Burn my clothes and then my body, I don't care how just kill me! Feel the pain, running through my body, I feel the pain and all the hate and all the anger.. So feel the pain! Feel the pain! I hate my life your the only soul i have left, I need you now and forever! Don’t leave my side or i will die right there and then.. I love you now and always, don't forget.. I feel that pain! For now and forever I feel that pain! So I’m ending it here, Goodbye, I’m gone, Lots of love always, because you’re my special one, I love you so much more than I could ever explain, I love you and the way you look at me in my eyes of pain, all I can ever do I feel the pain, its upsetting my soul, its upsetting my mind, I’m dying right here and now, and all you do is shine, your so bright and beautiful, your fun and so much more, so why do you leave me now? Turning your back on me, I need you, because I’m feeling the pain, I need you and your love, because I’m feeling the pain, Feel the pain! All day and night, Feel the pain while shining bright, I cry right now, as I leave your side, Feeling the pain, while I died... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackrose777 (4-15-2005 - 06:33 AM)
| WOW that was so powerful...you words were so real they almost made me feel the pain |
by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 01:13 PM)
| Wow, I love your poetry. You have an excelent talent....I hope things get better for you. It was a wonderful poem. -AthiestAnarchist (at school :( ) |
by JuggaletteTori (4-15-2005 - 02:46 PM)
| thats great but i think its missing something GUMMI BEARS lol i saw the commet you left on my poem and i just wanted to say ur poem is great |
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