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Leave Me Alone (plz comment)
written by --comfortably_numb--
02:37 PM 4/15/05
I laugh at you,
While taking pleasure in watching all your suffering
I laugh at the way you always have acted like I’m your son
I’ve faded away,
Now I’m my own person,
You’ve faded from my thoughts my dreams and my life
I hate the way you spoke to me,
Like you had charge over me
You will never know what I’m like
I’m changing
I’m growing
I’m maturing
I’m not your little boy anymore
I’m growing up
I’m not that kid that loved to laugh
I’m different
I hate all joy
All you sarcastic jokes
I hate my life and I hate yours
You’ve faded from me
And my life
Forever and like you never were part of me
I hate you and your smile
Because you’re the part of me I have never believed in
I have never believed in you or your judgment
I have never believed in your faith in everyone
You lack of lies and your belief in everyone
I hate you
Leave me alone
I hate the way you’ve pretended I was your son
The way you acted like I loved you
I’m new,
Different,
Misunderstood,
DIFFERENT!
I’m a new person
I don’t need your false love
Leave me alone
Let me be me
And I’ll let you live
Because I have new powers
New friends on the streets
So let me be…
ME!!!!


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» Comments / Feedback
by SATANS666WICKED666ANGEL (4-15-2005 - 02:40 PM)
I liked this poem alot. Good job!

by --comfortably_numb-- (4-15-2005 - 02:47 PM)
thnx m8.. if you liked it alot, check out all my poems, I hate them, but many say they are good...

by JuggaletteTori (4-15-2005 - 03:04 PM)
i loved this poem this is how i feal about me and my dad i hate him so fucking much but im a girl not a guy so if that was diffrent then this would be my life...... __tori__

by (guest) (4-16-2005 - 02:22 AM)
that's hella good. plus i can relate to it, even tho i'm a chick, not a guy, but u get it right? i really liked this one.

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