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» Poem: Daddy . . .
Daddy . . .
written by whatShouldUsBe
06:25 PM 4/15/05
We'll be secret lovers once more
when's shes dead lying on the floor
No, I love her you said
but still you took me to your bed
together we made love through the night
how could something so wrong feel so right
when I left the next day
we didn't have anything to say
but when I saw the look in your eyes
when you saw her, I almost cried
You do love her not me
how could you do this don't you see
I need you more then she ever will
now I understood to get you I would have to kill
Once she was dead
I was certain it would be our bed
but no I was wrong once again
all I did was commit mortal sin
I had killed your love so true
and didn't know what to do
you yelled and cried
and screamed at me why?
Daddy, mommy took you away from me
now don't you see
I just wanted our love to be real
so mommy's life I did steal
Daddy if you hadn't taken me in your bed that night
and made something so wrong feel so right
Mommy would still be here with me
Daddy, you killed her don't you see!?!

YOU KILLED MOMMY, NOT ME!!!!


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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-15-2005 - 06:27 PM)
wtf is wrong with you!?

by whatShouldUsBe (4-15-2005 - 06:35 PM)
To answer you question, nothing is wrong with me. It's just a poem . . .

by xx_oNlyoNe_xXx (4-15-2005 - 09:13 PM)
ohh myy goodness.. please tell me that's not something that actually happened and it's only from your head..

by whatShouldUsBe (4-17-2005 - 06:32 AM)
YOU DECIDE! . . . u decide . . . ?

by black_tears19 (4-23-2005 - 04:55 AM)
no doubt, wtf is wrong with you, it better not be true cause if u like ur dad that way....ewww.....ur one messed up girl..+o(.....thats the worst poem i've ever heard........do a better job on ur next one, not one about ur dad and you having sex

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