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A girls lost love part. 2 (comments)
written by porkchop_chick07:28 PM 4/15/05The girl she walks,
she walks head down,
tears slowly flowing down her face,
she cries cause she sees him,
the boy that once broke her heart,
he walks with pride,
shes just a mess,
the girls shattered heart stings,
it hurts while she comes across his path,
when they come parallel to each other,
she feels he took the last of her,
he tore away her pride,
she can never be the same again,
he left scars on her,
now shes back to what she was,
NOTHING. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hopeless_seattle (4-15-2005 - 07:37 PM)
| wow, this is a really cool poem. Nice job! |
by porkchop_chick (4-15-2005 - 07:39 PM)
| thank u for your very nice comment. I appreciate it. |
by MySoReSpOt (4-15-2005 - 07:44 PM)
| I loved this poem! It really made me picture all that going on.. and that made it even more go to my heart. id love to see the vol. 1 two...cud u tell me in what link can i find it? |
by MySoReSpOt (4-15-2005 - 07:44 PM)
| I loved this poem! It really made me picture all that going on.. and that made it even more go to my heart. id love to see the vol. 1 too( if there is one)...cud u tell me in what link can i find it? |
by MySoReSpOt (4-15-2005 - 07:46 PM)
| sry, from all that, i corrected the mistakes on the second comment.. anyways it took me about 5 seconds to find the other one...ill go read it now... |
by pipa (4-15-2005 - 07:48 PM)
| same as above and WOW! really really good, well done |
by porkchop_chick (4-15-2005 - 07:50 PM)
| THANK U all for all your nice comments i appreciate it sooo much. |
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