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the mirror of tears (COMMENTS PLEASE!)
written by porkchop_chick07:44 PM 4/15/05She sits on her bed,
tears flowing down her face,
her eyes of brown glass,
her face of full of pain,
nothing but a mirror near her,
the only thing thats ever seen her pain,
a mirror full of her sad memories,
a mirror that has seen everything,
when she cried for him,
when she thought of giving up,
when she broke everything in her sight,
a mirror that only reminded her of wiping her tears,
she slowly looks up at her mirror,
shes a mess,
her hairs everywhere,
her eyes blood shot red,
her face full of salty tears,
she wipes her tears away,
shes walks out her room,
only to hide her emotions all over again,
she leaves the mirror,
only to see her tears in it once again. |
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comments please!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by pipa (4-15-2005 - 07:46 PM)
| wow!!! really good and reall good use of words and description, well done. |
by porkchop_chick (4-15-2005 - 07:51 PM)
| Thanks for u comment, i love hearing from your comments. |
by Meaningless_Soul (4-15-2005 - 08:32 PM)
| Wow. that was really awesome. . . I love it! Good job |
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