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Bitter
written by perfect.flaws08:40 PM 4/15/05No more Bitter Reading
Repitition is what your writing.
nothings new or a bit inciting
nothing has effulgence,
Poetry has elegance,
dont forget that.
I want to have tasteful read.
In this request there is no greed,
it's just i hate the bitter flavour thats taken over.
Broken hearts, Dead Relatives.
Try something more seductive,
catch the eye, expose our minds,
dont just write an outline,
write something that will inspire the blind.
Write something so i wont resign!!
No more Bitter Reading. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This was submitted yesterday..but i feel the need to yet again submit it today...
To many Repeted poems...
i need to read something Inspirational...or just something NEW.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hopeless_seattle (4-15-2005 - 08:44 PM)
by Scythe42 (4-16-2005 - 04:55 AM)
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