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» Poem: stop your habit (comments plz)
stop your habit (comments plz)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
10:49 PM 4/15/05
don't know your own strength
when your feeding your habit
i gave you my heart
but with a drugged knife you stabbed it
i've stuck with you thru all the shit
all the pain you put me thru
i thought for sure you needed me
i could've swore i loved you
i sat there in the waiting room
as the doctor's asked me questions
i just told him it was just another night
of you and your injections
i thought that i could cure you
i thought i could make you stop
i thought with me you wouldn't need the drugs,
to make you feel on top
if i'm not helping, then i'm only hurting
then you don't need me after all
if you would only listen to how much i love you
and could back away from your habits call
then those scars on your arms would leave
and if you fell ,we both would fall


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by alone_in_my_head (4-16-2005 - 11:50 AM)
good ending i liked it x

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