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» Poem: dad don't leave
dad don't leave
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
11:09 PM 4/15/05
daddy please don't leave
i'll be your little girl
i'll tell you every single day
your the best dad in the world
i'll make mama stop screaming
and making you shout
if you leave, take me with you
please don't push me out
of your world with that girl
who ever the hell your with now
i don't care, i'll call her mom
i don't like the real one any way
i'll be good, and do no wrong
we don't have to stay
please daddy take me with you
pick me up any day
oh god don't leave me too
here in this cursed place
i'll be your little girl
lets leave and run to the next day
i just woke up from the dream
of the day you went away


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i really have a bad relationship w/ my dad now, he's into my step mom who hates me, so he hates me too, comment if yo want, its not my best

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by ForEverLonley (4-15-2005 - 11:56 PM)
i thought i twas amazing, good job

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