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My Loathsome Kingdom
written by perfect.flaws
01:29 AM 4/16/05
In my paradise,
I was obtained by the prized, so be i.
I was the rejuvenator,

your one, and only creator.
I was remorseless,
so if you did not obey
death is what I would repay.

Unaware, Clueless, Unapprised
of what was next to arise.
It was now me desperate on my knees
pleading of you to compromise.
You would not listen, ostracized.

My mind will not let me apprehend.
Why was it me you had to massacre?
Why was it me you needed to conquer?
I was your only cure!
You'll be left unpure!

Cessation has over come me,
greed was your only deed,
I may have been a demon's fertile seed
but your Satan's Forgotten Advocate
why me did you succumb..
When I was your only fund?

Over throw me that you did,
Though my kingdom not,
I may by dead and morbid,
but I can still forbid.

My Paradise was the spell I cast over you,
You ignoramus, you know I’m shrewd.
My Life you did manage to seize,
but not those of which frees you from my Empire,
the keys, you did neglect.
So now, you’re left in desolation, for eternity
in my loathsome Kingdom.


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by Scythe42 (4-16-2005 - 04:22 AM)
that was really awsome. I like the title. Sounds good to me.

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