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» Poem: Deaf Suicide
Deaf Suicide
written by Scythe42
03:07 AM 4/16/05
You laugh as I tried to reach out to you,
You thought it was a joke,
Only here for entertainment,
You thought I was just playing around,
I wouldn't really kill anyone,
Would I?
I wouldn't get my sword and go slit my throat,
I wouldn't get my pistol and shoot it through my head,
I wouldn't want to die,
Would I?
I wouldn't try to get attention by hurting myself,
I wouldn't try to reach out to people who wouldn't even listen,
Would I?
I wouldn't try to open myself up having a chance that people would care,
Would I?
Even if I did all of that people still wouldn't love me,
So why try?
There's always a chance right?
That they would realize they had shut me out,
That they would find out about all the pain inside,
And finally realize,
That they wouldn't listen when I wanted to die.


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» Comments / Feedback
by perfect.flaws (4-16-2005 - 03:16 AM)
hmm i actually like this.. its not like some suicidal poems... i like the way you put you point of a view accross..thats what caught me. great job.

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