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Untitled(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
03:09 AM 4/16/05
Is it bad to long for sumthing that you can never keep?
I mean, I knew that it could never work between us,
We are just too different,
not to mention my issues with trust.
Everyone is right,
we are from two different worlds,
I mean, you grew up playing basketball,
while I chased rabbits and squirrels.
How can it work,
me and you?
but it is hard to imagine,
a life without you.
But we are so different,
maybe my dad is right,
my whole world with you,
is nothing but a struggle, a fight!
I dont want him to be right,
I stuck up for you when he yelled at me,
He just thinks you want in my pants,
that you are incapable of loving me.
What is wrong with me?
What does she have that I dont?
I mean, I am bold and outspoken,
I step up when you wont.
Why do you want her,
but you got stuck with me?
Why do you pretend?
Why pretend that you are happy?
I love you and I always will,
but it is clear you dont feel the same,
I mean, you called me,
by her name!!!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Anthony, I wrote this earlier in the day b4 u said u love me but I just hope you r not lying!

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