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Darkness reminds me of lost love(comment
written by porkchop_chick04:07 AM 4/16/05A girl lays down on her bed,
laying in the darkness,
the darkness is never kind to her,
the darkness makes her think of him,
it makes her cry for him,
it makes her remember the day he left,
it makes her remember what she lost,
the darkness tortures her poor mind,
showing her all the good moments they had,
showing her how she lost all that,
the darkness pulling her,
pulling her to depression,
sometimes the girl just breaks down,
shes only human,
she screams and cries,
the darkness hides this from everyone else,
no one knows but the darkness,
a secret only her and the darkness knows,
when the darkness is gone,
she wipes her tears away,
and puts on her fake face,
and hides her real emotion,
and faces the rest of the world,
all by HERSELF. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cuttie (4-16-2005 - 04:10 AM)
by porkchop_chick (4-16-2005 - 04:12 AM)
| thank u for your comment, I really appreciate it. |
by *.:emo_lover:.* (4-16-2005 - 04:13 AM)
| hey I thought it was a good poem. I can relate to you a lot. Thats how I feel all the time. Thats how I feel when I go to bed at night. |
by porkchop_chick (4-16-2005 - 04:18 AM)
| Yes, it hurts to sleep at night. Thanks for your comment and im sorry that someone else has to go through the same thing I did. |
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