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» Poem: Looking
Looking
written by TowelytheThing
10:41 PM 5/8/04
I would look,
To find your world crashing.
And see your life slashing.
Snickering,
Laughing.
I look with a smile.
The blood is slurting.
You're gasping for breath.
Reaching for air,
Asking why?
Why did you do this to me?


I looked and laughed.
To return the favor.
I answered.
If you didn't know.
I am dead too.
I am looking for your pain.
As to what you gave me.
Sucks for you.
And don't turn your back on me again.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is how i felt on the inside-dead this was based from march and i finally thought of writing to it

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