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A girls lost love part. 2 (comments)
written by porkchop_chick
04:17 AM 4/16/05
The girl she walks,
she walks head down,
tears slowly flowing down her face,
she cries cause she sees him,
the boy that once broke her heart,
he walks with pride,
shes just a mess,
the girls shattered heart stings,
it hurts while she comes across his path,
when they come parallel to each other,
she feels he took the last of her,
he tore away her pride,
she can never be the same again,
he left scars on her,
now shes back to what she was,
NOTHING.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Heres the first a girls love love poem:
She sits there in the darkness,
waiting, waiting, and waiting,
for the man she loves,
he left one day leaving her in that darkness,
in her mind she thinks that he'll be back,
so she waits,
she waits till he comes back,
to pick her up from her weak legs,
to heal her heart that broke the moment he left,
she once held her head up high,
but now her head and eyes only reach the floor,
no strength to love again,
she could only love him,
months past no trace of him,
her heart turns as cold as ice,
but still she waits,
she waits for the man that showed her how to love,
finally he returns,
he returns with nothing to say to her,
he only returns to push her deeper into the ground,
she cries everynight,
only thinking about what she did wrong,
she gets a call one day,
its her friend and also her loves cousin,
she says he told her...,
he told her he don't want that girl no more,
the girl pauses a moment,
and finally knows the truth,
the truth being that it was never her fault,
it was him,
he never loved her,
but still when she looks back,
she remembers that face she once loved,
and that girl is me.

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by cuttie (4-16-2005 - 04:44 AM)
thats good

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