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If only you would love me
written by iloveakke08:02 AM 4/16/05I loved you
You didn't love me
I stayed true to you
My love you can't break free
All I did was love you
in everything you did
All I wanted was love
From you, but what'd you give?
A lot of sorrow and pain
A lot of wishing it was
A ton of scars and stains
A ton of dreams of us
If only you would love me
If only you would care
If only we could be
Together
Life's unfair |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
About being crazy in love but unloved and rejected...... about hating someone but loving them
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| » Comments / Feedback | by alone_in_my_head (4-16-2005 - 11:31 AM)
| hey, this was really good ireally enjoyed it specialy the 3rd verse i could reLY FEEl what you were saying . keep writting
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by LonelyIsGreen (4-16-2005 - 12:29 PM)
| This is exactly how I feel about my crush, and how I have all these feelings for him...but they arent returned. :( |
by porkchop_chick (4-16-2005 - 02:59 PM)
| I can relate to all that your saying. GOOD JOB on this poem. |
by (guest) (4-18-2005 - 05:11 PM)
| nice poem :D
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