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a love fading away (COMMENTS PLEASE)
written by porkchop_chick04:02 PM 4/16/05We love the smallest things,
Yet we never notice they're there,
We get attached to them,
yet we don't see them until they fade away,
we cry for them,
when we know it was all our fault,
we think we have the next day,
to tell some one we love them,
when a day does make a difference,
in time so short,
they can easily slip away from your hands,
then when they slip we finally feell lonlyness,
we cry our empty tears when their gone,
and u know what u lost finally,
We never know what we have until we have lost it,
Tell them you love them,
Show them you care,
Don't wait till the next day,
Because that next day might be the day-,
the day they fade away..… |
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PLEASE take time for this poem, its one of best ones. COMMENT PLEASE!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-17-2005 - 02:33 PM)
| hey, your poems are nice. i was searching for some poems on 'waiting' and found your's. looks like you broke up very recently. i feel sorry for you. this particular peom has some truth in it. keep up the good work. -venkat |
by porkchop_chick (4-21-2005 - 04:16 AM)
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