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Open Your Eyes
written by Aoji_EMO_Rocker
12:53 AM 4/17/05
i cant understand why i am here why i am still alive, i don't see were im headed just upseted of all these lies,when i walk in the street breath real deeply i just relax and wine i don't understand these troubles when i walk near someone they just choke and die am i a evil demon or a angel that just walks right by


when i see the street when i walk by you don't see me when im near you why dont you open your eyes to meeee,why don't you open your eyes to meeee,why when i walk by you cry at meee,i don't understand the tragityyy,i just see me as more freee why can't you open your eyes and seeee why do you cover the truth and let it just beee am i a demon or am i just meee do i have wings can i kill you and set you freee

-what did i do?, what do you see?, can i hold you?, can you be next to me?, can i touch you?, can i see your eyes?, can we get close? , can i shut off the light?-

why when im close to you,you fight?,why can't we both see the moons light?, why do you torcher me why does this hate make you bleed is it a seed is it my life is it just a drug or is it the bind that makes luv what is this im not a thug im just a person who shows the true luv,when ppl see me im evil a missunderstood person who sheds life when he sees you

did you ever wonder why everybody because i feel sick just thinking about it i know people who been through this shit why do i gotta wait anyway because it aint my time so lets go party and get some bacardi -i dont know why you say mad shit i just walk around sit then u go up to me and start thinking that i'll just choke up i dont wantto take your shit i'll just sit down and sit i dont know what you think because if your near me i'll brake your shit- i dont understand how much pain can gothrough one man if my life was cursed why do i have to handle all this shit that is worth the birth of this curse to show remorse for this spore that trys to lore everyone to the shore to die to cry to not think why just to randomly commit suiside


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its my latest song from my band

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by (guest) (4-17-2005 - 01:03 AM)
i love how you can take life experiences and make them into beautiful words and literature..you are very talented and can go very far in life through your words...your great at what you and so dont ever stop....~*LoVe AlIcIa*~

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