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» Poem: LITTLE GIRL~COMMENTS
LITTLE GIRL~COMMENTS
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
01:56 AM 4/17/05
LIFE ENDS WHEN YOU WALK AWAY
DEATH CUTS DEEPER EVERY DAY
FOR THE LOVE I GAVE, WILL U REPAY
WHAT YOU HAVE STOLEN
WITH MY HEART YOU'VE PLAYED
SHE'S WALKING NOW
DO YOU EVEN CARE
SHE'S GOT YOUR EYES AND YOUR COLD STARE
IT'LL TAKE TIME AND LOVE,TO REPAIR
HOW I'M THE ONLY ONE,WHO'LL ALWAYS BE THERE
YOU GAVE HER THAT LOOK WHEN YOU LEFT
I TRY MY HARDEST TO LOVE HER BEST
IT BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES
HOW GORGEUS SHE IS
NO BLACKENED SKIES ,NO PAINS TRUE KISS
SHE KNOWS NO FEAR ,SHE KNOWS NO BLAME
SHE LOVES EVERY THING ,SEES IT ALL AS A GAME
I KNOW LATER ON ,SHE'LL NEVER BE SAME
IT KILLS ME HOW U DON'T CARE
HOW U DON'T LOVE HER AS MUCH AS ME
BUT THATS THE WAY ITS ALWAYS BEEN
THERE'S NO WAY I COULD MAKE HER SEE
HER BIRTHDAY IS NEXT WEEK
DID YOU EVEN KNOW THE DAY
YOU SHOULD COME AROUND
TALK TO HER ANY WAY
I DON'T MIND IF YOU SPEND SOME TIME
BUT REMEMBER
THAT BEAUTIFUL LITTLE GIRL IS MINE


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