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~Suicide~
written by baby_lay0703:04 AM 4/17/05It's all I can think of
It's all I know
Day after day, Night after night
Suicide comes into play
Some nights are worse than others
Sitting all alone,
In my room, Swaying...
The blade right in front of me
It looks so sharp, so peaceful...
My mind fills with thoughts,
As do my eyes with tears..
I pick up the blade, and sqeeze my eyes shut
Pressing it to my wrist, with a swipe...
I feel only a burning sensation
As I open my eyes I see blood pooring,
my blood...
Slower it gets as it flows through my viens,
as is my breath
It started out as a thought,
but now look at what I have done... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This poem is a true situation and hurt to write but i couldnt stop so please tell me what you think...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AnonymousGhost (4-17-2005 - 03:14 AM)
| I reallly like your poem... I understand how you feel...
My dayz and nightz feel the same.
God bless
*AnonymousGhost* |
by (guest) (4-17-2005 - 05:04 AM)
| Awsome poem i like it it was so real it felt like i was there keep up the good work |
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