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» Poem: to the one who broke my heart (REVISED)
to the one who broke my heart (REVISED)
written by forevrfalen4
07:13 AM 4/17/05
FOR GIRLS~

find a guy:
who calls you beautiful instead of hot…
who calls you back when you hang up on him…
who will stay awake just to watch you sleep…

wait for the boy:
who kisses you on your forehead…
who wants to show you off to the world when your in sweats…
who holds your hand in front of his friends…
who thinks you’re just as pretty without make up on…

wait for the one who:
constantly reminds you of how much he cares & how lucky he is to have you…
turns to his friends and says “… that’s her”

FOR GUYS~

find a girl:
who calls you babe or sweetie instead of hot or sexy…
who can’t stand it when you hang up on her…
who would sit there for hours looking into your eyes…

wait for the one:
who doesn’t care what you look like but loves you for what’s on the inside…
who looks @ you with a twinkle in her eyes & kisses you on the cheek instead of the lips…
who makes you smile just by knowing she loves you back…

wait for the girl:
who gives you a piggy back ride in public where everyone can see…
who will whisper in your ear “…you’re the one for me now and always”

WE HAD ALL OF THIS WHAT HAPPENED?

here is my whisper to you (or what I thought it was):
you’re the one for me now and always I love you with all my heart and I don’t care who knows it… I won’t let anything stand in the way of you knowing how much and to what extent I love you… who wants to be ordinary in a crazy world? I don’t care what they’re saying as long as I’m your girl. you get me when nobody understands, you come and take a chance. so what if I see the sunshine in the pouring rain, people think I’m crazy but you say that it’s ok. in my imagination anything goes. when none of the pieces fit you make sense of it, you leave me breathless. there’s not a minute that goes by every hour of everyday you’re not a part of me, you’re the one I love. I still get lost in your eyes I still get butterflies. I close my eyes and you chase my thoughts away. you make it all better, you make me who I am. the only thing that pulls me through is you. I don’t know where to start you’re in my head you’re in my heart. you’re all I think about you’re all I dream about. you linger in the dark you’re the shadows on my wall. you’re in every breath I take, you’re me. some how some way you’re the reason I woke up today. I never wanted this to end. I LOVE YOU AND THANK YOU FOR THE TIMES YOU LOVED ME BACK.

I love you with all my heart and always will... I gave you everything I had but oh well... Thanks for the good and the bad and everything we had, you broke my heart I dont know how to move on, but eventually you will and I will have to. Just please come back to me for one last night, make everything alright, put the pieces of my heart back together I cant live like this.

Love is... when you've had a huge fight but then decide to put aside your egos, hold hands and say, "I Love You"

Why couldn't it be like that again....? BECAUSE OF YOU
go ahead and blind yourself from your feelings because I know whats on the inside. You wanna die you wanna cry but in your eyes thats weekness, in my eyes its the truth. You're being immature, You're getting lost in your pain and in turn you're losing me.

If I ever let you see this, would you understand?
Would I get you back?
After tonight do i want you back?
Was it all a lie?
Did you really use me the way I thought you did?
I dont know any of the answers but its time for me to move on because
you wont come to your senses.
With a tear in my eye, leave you with the sweetest goodbye that you'll ever recieve.
When you realize what we had and what you lost it will be too late and I will be already gone....
Love Always and Forever yours "Faithfully" ~shannon


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the "Faithfully" @ the end is the name of a Journey song.... that was me and dillon's song

TO MY HEART MIND BODY AND SOUL... (or what once was) DILLON i love you and always will but youre running out of time and by the time you see this i will be already gone.....

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