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pain, scars,excuses
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP05:53 PM 4/17/05they've tied me down again
picked me up and then
let me astray
no use to fly away
to my yesterday
of self freedom
i caught myself again
thinking of the pain
i once felt
nothings going right
but i'll just wait till night
it'll be better
cutting all my nooses
falling my hurt chooses
to finally let me go
so beat me instead of them
pain being my only zen
i'm ok on my own
i can't use pain as an excuse again
i've made my own throne
and laying here beside myself
talking to my scars
they're getting lighter as we speak
i don't need them ne more
laying as i stand
threw away the crimson bands
burt them and let them fly
can now see in light, not just in dark
having trouble using my heart
but that will pass
time has no measure now
found myself in the crowd
gave myself a high
looking in a mirrior now
without burdens breaking it down
getting clearer all the time
i burnt my scars for them
killed my pain and then
reasoned with my excuses
not sorry for my mistakes
here for what it takes
this time the game is who loses
my pain never caught me
it just went with me
the scars didn't heal me
just made it easier to see me
in my own lite
slowly can fly
threw away the pain scars and excuses
learning how to try |
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i just made my own release, i really hope you guys like this one!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-17-2005 - 11:01 PM)
| omg that poem was amazing i just can relate so much to it and when i read a really good poem i can relate to it like releases this really good feeling of like not being alone i guess >_> keep writing you have a true talent |
by demented_vampire (4-18-2005 - 02:49 PM)
| wow. the poem speaks for itself. its a really good poem. it expresses what hapens to someone and how they try to just stop the lies and try not to hide what is going on anymore. awesome. i love it. ^_* ~*KRIS*~ |
by playswithrazorblades (4-18-2005 - 09:53 PM)
| cant really say why..but..i love it |
by Death_To_Me_ (4-20-2005 - 07:57 PM)
| This poem is amazing .... Good job!! |
by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 12:41 AM)
| ur poem was great. i know how u feel |
by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 03:29 PM)
| That poem was awsome, i can't really relate but i can feel your feelings through your wonderful description of your pain, please keep writting, your wonderful. |
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