» Poem: My Angel.... (Comments are Welcome) |
My Angel.... (Comments are Welcome)
written by True_Darkness08:54 PM 4/17/05My Angel,
My Guardian Watcher,
The One Who Shows me my Wrongs,
My Hero,
My Idolized Observer,
The One Who Wont be rememberd in any Songs,
My Mentor,
My Thoughtfull Critic,
The One Who is the Hardest To Please,
My Muse,
My Inspired Poet,
The Cause of all, And she Doesnt Know It. |
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This poem is dedicated to Morbid Angel,
one of my most treasured commentators.
Could use some work, I know the rhyming pattern is irregular [ View True_Darkness's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 109 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Morbid Angel (4-17-2005 - 09:12 PM)
Oh my god...thats so sweet! Aww, thats made me really happy :) |
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